The Mangrove Snapshot-Binh Hoa- close to Ho Chi Minh City
80The Mangrove Snapshot
This is a miniature peep into a horror world ! Unearthly upheaval..created by a so called civilised nation the mighty U.S. We don't see any horror ! We see the gentleness of innocent dust !
A young soldier is seperated from his unit. He is unnerved by the silence.
When a young kid is lost and frightened in the terrifying jungle of Vietnam.
He lives by the moment. Taking in the weirdness of the 'unusual ' around him.
Why was the grass orange ? Why were these women who looked so like his young wife at home said to be evil ? They were sweet and kind to him the enemy ! They weren't evil !!
Something wasn't quite right ! Something had changed !
' Hold my hand
we will wander down the orange way'.
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I will talk you through the hours
of events that happened on that day.
Don't know how it happened
I was lost I'd missed my way
in jungle deep and lonely
so alone but had to stay
The rule was clear for times like this
don't despair just obay
maybe hours but soon okay
I enjoyed the quiet of the delay
and lazed as I pondered about the raid
and thought ' why me ,if only'?
The yellowy orange dust was pretty
as it landed on my outstretched hand
little specs of pinky orange like confetti
at a wedding, when a marriage band
of gold is slipped upon a finger.
I closed my mind,didn't want to think
of people back in the other land.
I quenched my thirst from a
gently running stream
with strange colours of
which I had never seen
then ate from trees laden
with luscious fruit.
I looked up high
and so began a dream.
The leaves had left the trees
and floated elsewhere
many days ago.
A smell so strange
would follow from the dew
left by the rains.
My headaches came when
eating fruit or sometimes
bathing feet in a stream.
Then times when I would rest
my aching ,aching head
on brightly covered fallen logs
Painted orange with some red.
A dusty substance
reminded me of footsteps.
Footsteps made by father Christmas
when he called to bring my presents.
I even have a photo of these events
a photo taken in the snow all those years ago
then a picture of the chimney
and the soot on Santa's feet
as he gently tread along the black
marble hearth,to bring the treats
remembered from my youth
at father Christmas time.
I often wondered where my
buddies were, did they remember me.
I died a while then in the sleep
remembered women lifting me
all small and neat were they
They placed me on a rug
then carried me to tunnels
where they gently nursed me
with words I couldn't say
no more memories.Just haze
Now I live in hope and be
thankful for my life...my days........
I am home again and never
will I venture to take anothers
land....................
Handprints of Father Christmas
- Seas of freedom
A Poem inspired by the murderous action of israelis boarding a peace boat taking much needed aid to Palestine.
- Cua Bono...............Who benefits
These words were written in the 1970s re. Vietnam Then more was added in 2oo3 re. Iraq.
- What's happeniong in India ..........Land Justice..Ratnagiri,South-west Maharashtra S
This is about the plight of a fishing village who are to be denied their lifes-work in the fishing industry-----the land is possibly being sold to a french company for a nuclear plant.
- The Vietnam War-British Complicity
A Few words About The Events in The 40s and 50s Which were In Anticipation Of The Vietnam Massacre.
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Hello Tom,
good to hear from you and same to you ,keep writing eh!
No, under this system it won't. Oh dear me! I nearly cried when I saw the cretton reading one of my favourite writers ,who is lovely to everyone,and would never dream of causing upset. Hope he didn't follow me to get there ?
sorry got a bit complicated with this comment,
best from jandee
Never be sorry for that. He's tried to come at me but I think he figured out he can't hang :-P I've seen his comments and know his game. Nice chatting with you again, I've been busy doing a website so HP visits have been short. Take care, Tom
You know I love you girl! Yo yo yo!
A great hub and thank you for sharing.
One of the things that I love about HubPages is the great variety of well written hubs there are for us to read;this one is certainly one of these.
Take care and enjoy your day.
Eddy.
Very unusual, thought-provoking and unique. Voting up and awesome.












justom Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago
Nice hub Jandee, will it ever end? Do you think the cowboy will (ha) come read this one? Probably not, Peace my friend! Tom